Kalina
Maintenance Team
System Slayer
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Posts: 308
Rank: SS-Class
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Post by Kalina on Aug 6, 2013 17:17:53 GMT -5
Welcome to Fairy Labyrinth. Bear with me for a moment because there is quite a bit that needs to be fixed.
Up-top:
-You need to replace the lucy icon with a 100x100 icon of your own. -The title should be formatted: FAIRY TAIL, dawn e'fleure -The character's name to the right of the icon should be all caps -'CloudyThinker' should be all lowercase, and it should be between a pair of { } -The 'Female,' 'Hetero,' and 'Good' should all be capitalized.
Personal:
-You need to replace the --- with your answers to the fields. The answers should not be bolded. -You need at least 10 personality traits, and if you use paragraph format you need to bold each of them.
Face Claim:
-This should be formatted: POKEMON, caitlyn by dawn e'fleure -The icon on the account should match your character's appearance.
Physical:
-Replace the --- with your answers to the fields.
Inventory: If she doesn't have any belongings you should put N/a or None.
Class:
-The class name should be caps. -In the class description you need to describe each school.
Afterimage/Battle Phase:
-If other characters can't see you because of an illusion, you will be unable to attack without removing the illusion.
Attack Memory:
-This is going too far from your theme of memory making. You can work with memories, but you can't use that to create a school capable of everything that your character can think of.
Transform Memory:
-I don't know yet what you plan to do with this school, but based on the name I'm guessing either it transforms others based on memory or alters memories. If you plan to alter memories I should warn you that abilities that mind control, charm characters or warp their personalities are not allowed unless they are severely weakened, or other extreme circumstances.
Third Post:
-The character's name in the first section should be all caps. -The character's name in the second section should be all caps -This should be formatted: POKEMON, caitlyn by dawn e'fleure -Each of these should be between code tags [*code] [*/code] without the *
There's a lot here, I know, but work with us and we should be able to clean this up. For now, if you have any questions please PM me or skype kyouzou2. When you are done making these updates, don't forget to post in the notification thread again. That thread let's the staff know what needs to be graded.
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